In on it.

(This post is mostly for me to remember) Went and saw 'In on it' by Daniel MacIvor. This review is exactly right: http://theater.nytimes.com/mem/theater/treview.html It's a coincidence that I also just finished reading through a script for a friend of mine. And the problems are very similar between the two scripts. The exercise of the script out-performs its story. I look forward to seeing what my friend does with his script.